http://elialshadowpine.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] elialshadowpine 2012-03-30 05:46 am (UTC)

I LOVED the first books SO MUCH. They were starting to edge towards being sexier around 5 or 6 but it was in line with her character development. Obsidian Butterfly was amazing, and probably one of my favorites in the series.

Annnnnnd then there was Narcissus in Chains. Oh lordie. What pissed me off even more was that I had gotten the rest of the books through the library because I hadn't been able to save the money to buy them all -- and the first one I got in hardcover? Narcissus. -_-

And, argh, it's not that I dislike erotica or anything, cause, I actually really liked the first couple of Merry Gentry books. Because that was the character. But it just felt like she couldn't keep track of which character she was writing, and the longer the stories went on, the more Merry and Anita kinda... meshed into one person.

Lazy, lazy writing.

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