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Aelin Lovelace ([personal profile] elialshadowpine) wrote2012-03-29 10:23 am

[unfiltered] Women in Urban Fantasy and Mistreatment Thereof

I love urban fantasy. I have for years. I started out with Mercedes Lackey's Diana Tregarde series, then discovered Laurell K. Hamilton's Anita Blake books, and longed for more. For a long while, it just didn't exist. Annnnnd then it boomed.

Unfortunately, there's a pattern in urban fantasy that I have a huge problem with and has been turning me off the genre more and more. And that's the treatment of women in urban fantasy. You would think this wouldn't be an issue. After all, most urban fantasy these days features a tough, competent, kickass heroine. What could go wrong? Well, a lot of things.

Most prevalent is the overwhelming tendency to completely defang women. Hear me out. Most modern urban fantasy has a heavy romantic subplot and borrows heavily from romance tropes. Being a writer myself, I follow a lot of writing circles, and I can't tell you how many times I have heard someone say, "I have this awesome heroine, but she's so capable, she does everything! And I need to make the hero sexy! And nobody will find the hero sexy if the heroine can do better than him!"

Ignoring the obvious solution of having the hero and heroine have completely different and complementary strengths, far too many writers go for the TSTL solution. If I had a penny for every time I saw a heroine do something completely out of character... *sigh*

Like, oh, storming off for no good reason and doing something utterly stupid that nobody competent in their field would do. Usually because, well, the hero suggested it, and thus he must be wrong. And if there was a good reason for the heroine to disagree, great! But that's often not it at all. It's a matter of cutting off her nose to spite her face. It's a plot device to put the heroine in a position where the hero has to come to the rescue and save her from her own stupidity -- and frankly, this is just insulting. And it's common. Ridiculously common. And it's lazy writing.

It's one thing if, hey, the heroine runs into odds that she can't beat, or an enemy that's stronger than her, or gets outwitted by someone equally as capable. But that's not what's happening. These are situations the author is forcing the heroine into by making her act out of character for the purpose of giving the hero a moment to shine. Why not put the characters in situations where both their skills are needed? But, that wouldn't allow the heroine to be the damsel in distress, now would it?

One of the other major issues in urban fantasy in regards to women is how the heroines relate to other women. In a genre that is so focused on strong female characters, it is pretty shocking how few heroines actually have relationships with other women. Often, other women are not friends and allies, but the enemy. Often, the heroine looks down on other women. And you see the same trope over and over again -- the leather-clad dark and tortured gun-toting heroine whose strength is all physical or perhaps supernatural.

This is really just the whole "girl in the boy's club" thing rearing its head. Femininity is derided while masculinity is put on a pedestal. Rarely do we see women who enjoy feminine things, and when we do, it's usually a slight touch rather than an integral part of the character. Even Anita Blake, with her stuffed penguin collection, dismisses and derides other women. It's been a long time since I read the books, admittedly, and I haven't read the recent ones, but of the early series, all the characters that I recall her being close to were male.

(Mind, the problem is not that masculine-leaning heroines exist. The problem is that they are the sole archetype that we see commonly in urban fantasy heroines.[1])

Very few urban fantasies actually pass the Bechdel test (two women, who talk to each other, about something other than a man). For a genre that is supposedly woman-focused, that's just sad. Where are all the relationships between women? Most of us have friends who are women, mothers, sisters, aunts, etc. Where are they?

So what's the solution here? It comes down to writers being aware of the social implications their fiction will have. Because words have meanings, and stories have power. If they didn't have power, Piers Anthony's Mode books wouldn't have helped me when I was a suicidal teen, and Mercedes Lackey's books wouldn't have helped me come to terms with my bisexuality.

When even supposedly strong heroines are undermined at every turn and cannot succeed without the aid of a man, the underlying message is that of Well, if $awesomecharacter can't do it, why should I believe I can? Women are already at a disadvantage in society, with all the negative messages lobbed at us. We should be able to read fiction that empowers us, not reinforces that we are nothing without a man.

I am not saying that heroines should be all-powerful, because that would be boring. But if you're writing about a top-notch FBI agent, you don't have her forget basic gun safety. You don't have her barging into trouble without thinking about it. You don't have her so distracted by the hero's good looks that she misses the villain's move and gets trapped (and yes, I have read this). It sends a very negative message.

So how do you get around it when you need the heroine to screw up somewhere? Well, make it a believable screw-up, not something that a rookie would do (unless your character is a rookie, but most of the heroines I've seen in urban fantasy are purported to be some of the best at what they do). Or, hey, maybe she doesn't have all the information, makes a decision on what she knows, and then finds out that she was missing a vital piece of the puzzle.

But you know what I'd love to see more of? I'd love to see more heroines who get themselves out of that pickle, rather than heroines who have to be rescued by the hero. But, how do I manage an alpha hero and heroine and their power struggle without having one or the other knuckle under? Not everything has to be a power struggle, although they can be fun to write. The best alpha heroes I've read have been adept in their own field but respected the heroine in hers and listened to her opinions. But what if they're both experts in the same field? Well, hey, they're probably going to argue -- but the automatic reaction shouldn't be for the heroine to be the one who's wrong. Mix it up a little. Or hey! Maybe they're both wrong.

There's a lot of focus on alpha heroes in urban fantasy and a need to make them sexy. You know what? The sexiest heroes I've read aren't the ones who are always rescuing the artificially created dumbass heroine -- they're the ones who respect the heroine, her abilities, her strengths, and love her for who she is. The ones who aren't threatened by a strong woman. The ones who know when it's appropriate to take a backseat. The ones who know when it's time to stand their ground, and when it's time to say, "Hey, you know more about this than I do", or "I don't agree, but let's compromise." It's not an all or nothing situation.

I'd love to see more women who have relationships with other women, too. I'd also like to see a greater breadth of heroines -- heroines of color, heroines with disabilities, queer heroines, etc! Or hey, maybe not the heroine but a lady friend who is one of the above, or someone deeply involved in the story. I'd love to see more focus on this, because the lone uber!heroine surrounded by a sausage-fest is getting old.

This is something that writers have the power to change. Let's change it.


[1] I know there are exceptions to this. Please do not focus on them. This is a widespread issue, and the fact that there are exceptions does not negate that the overwhelming majority of urban fantasy heroines fits only one archetype.

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[identity profile] pewter.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I tend to hunt out those exceptions, tbh, and give them my money. I very much agree with you - I cannot stand the Laura K Hamilton books to be honest

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I do too. I haven't bought much urban fantasy in quite a long while because of how women are approached. I've been reading a lot of steampunk lately, and while it certainly has its issues (like glamourization of colonialism in the UK based stories), I don't see nearly the amount of degradation of women as in urban fantasy.

YA urban fantasy also has its own set of issues which are different from adult urban fantasy, except they also have the same issues that are in adult UF. -_-

I adored the early LKH books. Part of that was that at the time, there wasn't anything else. Part of it was that Anita was a really gripping character, and she grew, at least in the early books. She started out very close-minded and prejudiced and then started to realize that, hey, the monsters weren't all so monstrous... but still a lot of other issues, particularly in her attitude towards other women. And the later books, I'm not touching with a fifty foot pole.

[identity profile] robertsloan2.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree with you. Thanks for pointing this out. What's scary is that the best example I can think of is a heroine who isn't from urban fantasy - Silence of the Lambs, that relationship with Ardelia Mapp was wonderful, she was the one sticking her neck out, her coworkers varied but none of them were there at the denouement. Her mistakes were natural ones and she wasn't the one who let Lecter out.

Or a very old urban fantasy - Charles de Lint's novels set in Canada had a cast about evenly divided male-female and all the characters were memorable, they knew each other, the female characters had friendships with other women and the world seemed more natural. Mostly it was the subculture of bohemian artists and musicians being portrayed as a whole.

I'll keep this in mind when I write my Mage Cats series. The humans have friends. Or heck, their cats have friends so they meet friends. I'll try to put those friendships more on stage.

[identity profile] spitphyre.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I have plans to change this! If I get published. ... Or at least help change it. If we both get published we could help start an unofficial club :P

[identity profile] spitphyre.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Seanan McGuire does a good job of bucking the trend. Oddly enough so does J.A. Pitts (who is a man) But there's two, two(!) authors out of how many? Yeah. Bleh.

[identity profile] pewter.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
the two series I love are the Mercy series by Patricia Briggs, and the Cheshire Red Reports by Cherie Priest, Cheshire Red is a lot of fun although it's only just gotten started.

[identity profile] spitphyre.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Cheshire Red! Yes. Though the only female she hung out with was that little girl. But she was certainly competent. :( I hope the publishing house decides to get her to write more. She didn't get another contract.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Woot :)

It was actually part of the impetus to switch Alex to a woman in Stronger. I was reading an article about relationships between women in fantasy, and I stopped and thought, and realized that my heroine didn't have any female friends except her coworker, who was more like an acquaintance anyway. And I got to thinking how it would change everything if Alex was a woman... and Lex was born :)

And now I have a book full of queer characters, lol.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love the book by Cherie Priest. I haven't gotten my hands on the second one yet, though. I should see if my library has it in yet (last I checked, they didn't).

I've been a little put off by the Mercy books because I'd heard that there was a lot of focus around the women as being less important than the men, with the heroine being an exception because she is an alpha. And then the rape in the later book. I should probably get around to reading it for myself, heh.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I only read the first Toby book and wasn't immediately captured (burnt out on faerie books after the plethora of YA ones I've read) but I LOVED Discount Armageddon. AMAZING.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 07:15 pm (UTC)(link)
She didn't!? That's a shame. It's one of the few urban fantasies I've read recently that I really liked.

[identity profile] shanrina.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I couldn't agree more. This is why I read so little urban fantasy now. I keep up with a few authors I previously discovered but I don't seek out new authors in the subgenre anymore unless I've read reviews and the books have been vetted by people whose opinions I trust. I don't write much urban fantasy, but when I do I definitely try to keep this in mind.

[identity profile] lietya.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not raising this as an exception (because it absolutely is, and the larger point should stand) but as a "you might find this series appealing," if that's OK.

Kim Harrison's Hollows series features an urban fantasy female protagonist who admittedly does make some dumb decisions, but not because she wants/needs to be saved by a guy; more importantly, the first dozen books or so emphasize a remarkable dance of seduction between her purportedly heterosexual self and her bisexual vampire roommate. (I won't spoil whether the UST ever becomes realized, but its mere existence was gratifying for me.) That roommate is also portrayed as incredibly, terrifyingly dangerous, which was satisfying to me in a different way; we so rarely get female characters who are presented as legitimately "will kill you and eat you like an unrepentant monster if things get out of hand."

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually only got about 150 pages into the first Kim Harrison book because I found the heroine TSTL, LOL. It's been several years so I don't remember the details, but I do remember staring in bewilderment wondering how the character had survived to adulthood. LOL.

[identity profile] lietya.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
OK, fair enough. :) I thought it improved later in the book/series, but you're not the first person who reacted that way to her, either. Could be I was more forgiving because of that relationship!

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I heard about the relationship too and really, really wanted to like it, but it was pissing me off real bad. ISTR I also disliked other aspects of her personality, too, which meant that continuing to read it was probably wasted time. I have a lot in my TBR pile, you see.

I wish GBLT characters were more common so that it wasn't a matter of "I hate this character but this is one of the few books with a bi character out there!"

[identity profile] lietya.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't blame you at all - 400 books a year and my own TBR pile still keeps growing, so at some point we have to accept that rejecting books for anything the least bit annoying is just fine. :)

Yeah, that's another aspect of the conversation that doesn't get enough discussion (that it'd be nice to have a wide variety of *choices* for GLBT characters).

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm considering writing a "series" of rants like this, because I have a whole bunch of stuff bottled up for awhile now. I talk about it here and there in community posts and the like but... some of it doesn't really get discussed, like the nearly complete lack of disabled characters in SFF (that don't get magically healed).

That one will be an epic rant. -_-

[identity profile] lietya.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
It would be a valuable series, I think. If and when you feel up to ranting epically, anyway (and I don't blame you, some days I'm just too tired).

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh man, yeah. I have been tired a lot. Right now I am... honestly bordering on hypomanic. I haven't slept, and I'm bouncy, and and vwoom! I want to rant about ALL THE THINGS. ^_^

... unlike the rest of this week, wherein my hands have hurt so much that typing has been difficult. -_-

[identity profile] everstar3.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god, LKH. Do not even get me started. I read her until either Obsidian Butterfly or Micah -- I think it was Micah -- and decided, "Yeah, I'm done." I didn't mind her faerie series because it seemed designed to be porn, but then Anita started banging everything like a one-woman drum kit and yeah. Done. (And the rampant Mary Sue-ism! Holy crap!)

I'm thinking over the urban fantasy series I have been reading, and I definitely recognize the trend to which you're pointing. I love Patricia Briggs's Mercy Thompson and Alpha and Omega books, but she has a real paucity of recurring female characters other than her two mains. Seanan McGuire's October Daye books are probably the least problematic ones I follow: Toby is badass and getting badassier, and she's got at least three female friends I can think of off the top of my head. Not a lot of diversity, though.

Do you have any recommendations for ones that don't utterly suck? What are some of the good steampunks you've been reading? (I hear Meljean Brook's steampunks are amazing.)

[identity profile] everstar3.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I just cited Seanan McGuire as the least problematic of the urban fantasy authors I read, so hurrah! XD But yeah, when I sit back and think about it, I'm like, "Christ, don't these women characters ever want to get away from their Twu Wuvs and want to spend an evening with some fellow girls and nachos and bad movies?"

Also eeeee Super Best Friends.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Let me C&P from the comment I wrote over on DW :)

Black Blade Blues by JA Pitt. The heroine is a lesbian. Need I say more? I will note that one of the things that the heroine goes through in the book is dealing with her own internalized homophobia. It was a little offputting to me because it brought back a lot of bad memories, but! She gets over it and the second book is all ass-kicking lesbian chick. :)

Eileen Wilks' Lupi books. These are technically labeled romance but they are totally urban fantasy. They follow two couples through the serious, switching off which one is the focus, although both are in each book. The first one is kinda standard urban fantasy, but stick with it, it gets really amazing in book two and onward. Oh, and one of the heroines, Lily? is a POC; Asian. Her relationships with her mother, and in one of the books, her grandmother, are at the forefront, as is her relationship with Cynna, who is a kickass tattooed sorceress chick. And in the later books there is a... sorta genderqueer/gender neutral demon who ends up on earth and later decides to identify as a woman, and... there's lots of relationships between women and competent characters. Is amazing.

Discount Armageddon by Seanan McGuire -- OMG MUST READ. Awesome world setting, and the book starts off with the heroine and her telepathic cousin/best friend trolling for bad guys. Also, the heroine is a waitress at a strip club, and her relationships with the other women she works with is a major part of the story.

the Demonica books by Larissa Ione -- with the caveat that these are DEFINITELY more towards romance, and there is slightly more focus on the heroes... however, the women kick ass and take names, and they aren't treated unequally imo. It is... kinda like Angel in setting and tone, with lots more sex, and less refridgeration of women. I really am borderline on recommending these in this list because of the focus on the men, but, I really think they are worth reading.

The Edge books by Ilona Andrews - these are sorta Southern fantasy books that feel like they could be in our world. There is a HUGE focus on family here because the setting is Deep South. So you do see a lot of the relationships between the women in the various books, and the women definitely hold their own.

Not quite urban fantasy but the Psy Changeling series by Nalini Singh -- again, more toward romance, this time futuristic... combine shapeshifters and PsyCorp from Babylon 5 and you have these books. But the women of the various packs play a huge role, and they are all very involved with each other. And Tamsin is awesome (she's kinda the mother hen). And they have less consent issues than a lot of romance, that I've found.


Steampunk... I LOVE the Meljean Brook ones. I will, however, note that there are dubious consent issues in the first one. I don't recall if that's the case in the novella she has in the Burning Up anthology (which is excellent; it's probably my favorite anthology ever because ALL of the novellas are amazing), but it's not really out of line for the romance genre. It didn't bother me because it was clear the heroine was attracted, but some people might have issues, so I mention it. Heart of Steel, the second book in the series, did not have the same consent issues, and also has a woman of color as the main character. (So does The Iron Duke for that matter; Mina is Asian). It... hm. Mostly? Stands alone. Some of the worldbuilding stuff might be confusing if you just read the second, but I think that Meljean has a cliff's notes style world guide on her website.

The Greyfriar books are awesome, too. Vampires + Steampunk = WIN.

The Parasol Protectorate books are excellent and totally capture the whole Victorian writing and speaking style without being boring as shit. The heroine is hilarious, and the supporting cast are pretty awesome. There are also gay and bisexual characters, although one is fairly stereotypical (but he's awesome so I'll forgive that).

All Men of Genius is amazing, and I loved it enough to actually write a review on GoodReads. (http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/265875974)

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[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)

Dearly, Departed is YA futuristic sci fi steampunk dystopia with zombies. Some people complained that it tries to be too many things, but I loved it. There is a nod to GBLT people in the first chapter, although so far none of the characters are.

Scott Westerfeld's Leviathan series is really fun, too. I loved this series.

Zoe Archer's Blades of the Rose are sorta steampunk... although I will say they generally deal more with the romantic relationship than relationships between other characters, though it does come into play somewhat. They are really good, and two of the heroes of the quartet are of color.

There are some others I liked that don't quite have as prominent relationships between women -- The Iron Thorn and Boneshaker specifically -- but are also worth checking out.

But, you know? I don't think that any of the steampunk I've read has been as egregious in its treatment of women as urban fantasy. There are other issues, like the fact that much of it focuses on Victorian England and the upper class, but even that isn't true of all of it.

[identity profile] elialshadowpine.livejournal.com 2012-03-29 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Have you read Discount Armageddon? While I liked the Toby books I read, they didn't quite stand out to me from a lot of the other UF I've read. Discount, on the other hand, WOW.

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